Learning goal: We are learning to write a descriptive text.
Success criteria: We can do this when we can describe our Autumn Tree using our five senses.
Our autumn tree is large. The orange, red, yellow, brown and gold leaves are gliding softly to the ground. When I stand on the dried leaves they crackle under my feet.
By Olivia
Hi there Olivia. I enjoyed reading your descriptive text about the large Oak tree which stands in our playground at St. Patricks School. I can almost hear the dried up leaves crackling under your feet. Well done.
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